I'm revolutionizing the way I make music. There is a new song I'm working on; the title keeps changing so I can't really tell you what it is. Confused?

I'll explain. Right now, the song is simply an intro, just the beginning to what it will be eventually. I've posted it as it is, though, because I'm depending on the people of Newgrounds (yes, you) to help me finish it.

All you need to do is review my songs and suggest things I should change, point out something annoying or unnecesary, and do whatever else you want. Anything that will improve the song.

I'll upload a new version every few days with all the feedback in mind, and it will have a number next to the title, like so: (1). I have made versions (1) and (2) and I am currently working on (3).

You can check them out by clicking on my "Audio Submissions" above, specifically "Infiltrate! (1)" or "Stow Away (2)" and please, be cruel with your criticism, I mean it. Totally be reckless and point out every little flaw.

I'll leave all the previous versions up so you can follow the song's evolution.

Thanks,

JL