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JohnLeprechaun

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Ha.

Guitar part was great, but... it was the only part...

Instrument, instruments.

The song was good, the instruments were not. Slayer was very noticable, and bass was sort of... dull.

Sounds...

Artificial. I don't know if that's what you were aiming for, but it's repetitive, the instruments are really obviously fake, and the melody is sort of annoying to be honest. If you choose better instruments, make the melody more dynamic, make the entire song more dynamic, actually, and re-upload it, then we can talk.

MastaSensei responds:

I diden't want it to sound real(if your speaking abouyt the guitar parts). Btw thats my biggest problem is repetitiveness

Nice

I like piano solos, and this is a prime example. I can really feel the emotion.

Hm...

It definitely brings Kingdom Hearts to mind. It's raelly catchy, I like the drums.

Sorrow-316 responds:

Yeah The Drums Are the One item I cant Exactly Do Correctly, Im glad they came out good here! Thanks for Reviewing!

Hm...

If you're gonna upload a track, make it at least close to full length. I will admit, it loops quite well, and it's catchy. You need to add another melody, or a second part to it, though.

AdamZivojinovic responds:

it's a loop. it's supposed to be short

Epic

Surprisingly awesome lol

Drawoh responds:

Well, thanks ^^

Nice.

You oughta mess with the volume a little, there are some instruments that are more prominent than they need to be.

Kind of sounds like Let it Be

As said, the chord progression is generic, and the piano sounds artificial. Also, there's a really stale note at about 0:16. In FL Studio, that can be avoided.

Hm...

I think some of the melodies don't match up, especially towards the end. It never really kicks off, either. That song was an acceptable opening for a song, but not a song. Maybe right where you left off you add another melody or two and make the beat louder.

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