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Wow.

Admittedly, I really enjoyed this song. The only problem I had was the intro being too long. You should have stopped it at about 0:15. However, the melody is highly catchy, the beat keeps it exciting, and it carried very well.

Also, why is there so much empty space at the end?

Loud.

This almost sounds 8-bit, if it weren't for the percussion. I don't like it, but I can appreciate the skill it required to make.

Pivvot responds:

Thank you for the review, I can understand where you are coming from with the 8-bit statement. But thanks for actually appreciating the sheer amount of work it took me to get his sounding on-beat (you have no idea.) Once again, thank you for the review. I appreciate it.

Nice.

A good backup for a game or something. Catchy. And you heard right, the claps are fine.

I also like the fact that you can say good things about your own songs, most composers on this site write descriptions such as "This kinda sucks, but I hope you like it." or "Not rly good, but vote 5 anyway.". I respect that you aren't totally hard on yourself.

Cool song, I enjoyed it. It reminded me of "Sonic Adventure 2: Battle" which I am now off to play. Thanks for reminding me! ^-^

Catchy

I can picture fighter jets having at it. Pretty cool.

As for the genre, I'd say industrial is the best fit.

Visual

I can definitely see this is in a war game, and possibly a video too. I think it takes a little too long to get going, but once it does, it totally kicks ass. Great job.

Here's What I Think

I think the synths and trumpets are really shrill, try dulling them a little. Like you said, you could definitely add to the beat. The intro was too long, you should have stopped it at about 30 seconds or so. I can hear a lower brass instrument, but just barely. It would sound so much cooler if that were louder. After 1:24 it improves a lot, I'd say, but again, it repeats itself too much. The ending was cool, I liked it. Overall, it definitely needs improvement, but it has potential. Try making more than one melody, so it's mixed up at least a little bit.

Bleek989 responds:

YEA THANKS FOR A TIMEFULL REVIEW MAN HAHA
BUT YEA DIDNT PUT LOTTA TIME INTO IT
I MEEN SHIT IM MAKIN ALL THESE BEATS WIT A NORMAL PC
NO KEYBOARD N SHIT LIKE THAT HAHA BAK TO THE BASICS
LOST ALL MY SHIT
BUT THANKS ALOT MAN

Well...

I like the percussion and it sounds cool, it's just really REALLY repetitive considering it's only 40 seconds.

Reminds me of something

I know what it is! It reminds me of I Don't Care by Apocalyptica. It's not exactly like it, but it's similar. And obviously not on the cello.

Anyway, good song. It's not often I get to hear someone actually playing the instruments.

ShootingStar responds:

For the record I didn't base this off anything but one chord progression I made up, but glad you liked it!!

ShootingStar

More downloads than listens?

?? lol

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