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Incredible.

Very surreal. The chord progression in the beginning is fantastic, and it has a great suspenseful buildup into a dramatic, satisfying climax. There's absolutely nothing negative I can say about this song that would be the truth, except maybe a bit of repetition at the beginning, but other than that, I've got no qualms. Great job!

WritersBlock responds:

Thanks man. :D

Meh

It's alright, but it sounds like something recorded from a student's piano recital. Which is to say that the recording quality isn't that good, and although I can appreciate your talent as a musician, the composition was fairly simple and was a bit slow and anti-climactic. I like the part that comes in at about 1:51. That has the most energy and coolest composition out of the piece, I think.

Agauin, I think your playing is fantastic, it just needs some more flair.

someplaceelse responds:

Thanks for the reveiw, though I'm going to have to cut a corner here and say that I disagree with you when you say that My music needs some more flair, because not all music describes action, some classical music can be calm, and relaxing or just plain happy sounding. The way you described it how I intended it to sound, normal speed at first innergetic second then really slow at the end.

Well Rounded

Perfect for it's purpose. Catchy, suspenseful, and just generally kick ass.

As for Kethnarak, I imagine him as a spider-based enemy based on the creepy-crawly sounds in the song. Maybe he's got a bunch of legs and sends out little spiders to attack you.

Anyway, great song, you're quickly becoming one of my favorite artists on the site.

ObsidianSnow responds:

Great to hear what you had to say. I'll definitely take your ideas into consideration... ;)

Awesome, I hope to hear from you again, JohnLeprechaun. Thanks for the review.

that's slayer?

I didn't even recognize slayer until like, 30 seconds in. Yeah, you pretty much got the hang of rock, all you gotta do is use more realistic drums and less synth. It's supposed to sound like people actually playing the song. It's hard to explain. Great beat, but it's too heavy to be rock.

CKC2009 responds:

heavy metal?

Meh.

The pads are good, but the Slayer is terrible and the percussion is ghastly. The melodies are okay, just a terrible choice of instruments.

The piano was the only part that I truly enjoyed, and it was usually drowned out by Slayer.

Ydnar84 responds:

Took what you said to heart and changed a few things...

Meh

The beat was good, and the little riff there was okay, but holy god it got repetitive. That, and it never really had a melody, just a repeated riff. It sounded okay, but it was pretty much intro material for 3 and a half minutes.

Mans0n responds:

lol no, if you listened to the whole song it changes and i have a lead

It's okay.

I love the chord progression, but it's very repetitive, the beat is very repetitive and not very good, and the instruments are really obnoxious. Try changing the synths up a bit, edit the percussion, make a couple countermelodies, and you've got yourself a pretty awesome song here.

xxUltimaWeapon responds:

This may be a bit late... but thanks for the review. I might have to redo this song someday.

Eerie

The beginning was way creepy, which was good, but the rest of the song wasn't my style. Death metal isn't my thing. I can respect the talent, though, so 4/5, 8/10

Lost-Thought responds:

thanks for the respect, and reviewing and voting

Awesome song.

The guitar is fantastic. That's all I can say. Well, that, and that this song is freakin amazing. I love everything about it.

My only suggestion is that you change the ol 8-bit instruments. Keep the composing, just change it to a soft organ or a piano. The composing is great, they just don't match up well.

midimachine responds:

nahhhhh i like the 8-bit instruments :)

thanks very much though :D

huh.

This seems like it would be playing in a scene in a movie where they're just sitting in the bar, and there's live music playing in the background. It's an okay song, but it sounds very disorganized.

Number7even responds:

That's the point bro... The Counter Point ;)

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